My Poem: Relief

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by mouse6687 (I am #1) on Friday, 21-Nov-2008 16:19:33

Relief


As the dark gloomy air passes thru my lungs

I can't help but to feel relived

I am serine ,calm, comforted

You're a storm that passed thru me.

I'm content that you are no longer there

My sisters, My salvation, there to get me thru the times

Mood swings are neither here nor there

They were never part of me when you were near

The cool brisk air makes me feel alive

The dark will be my shelter

Firewater will be my weakness



12:34pm

Post 2 by margorp (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Friday, 21-Nov-2008 16:23:37

I like it...I'm not much for poetry but well done.